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December 5, 2009

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Comments by user: xoites

After reading this story there are only a few things i don't understand. The first and most important is that I don't know what "Fragile X" is. I don't know if its a toothpaste or a desease or a genetic condition. I don't know who made the decision to ban him from the bus or why a longer seatbelt could not have been provided. I did not even know seatbelts were required to ride a bus.

The five "W's" of Journalism are a really good place to start writing a story. Who, what, where, when and why. "How" helps as well.

(Suggest removal) 2/25/08 at 6:08 a.m.

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